does the title fit?
i purposely stayed away from punctuation because i wanted to achieve an emptier, airy, slow feel. how did that work out? or is it just all jumbled up together?
what do you see the 'razor' to be? and what blame?
critique: [link]their words mostly noises
ghosts with just voices
your words in my memory
are like music to me.
(i pray that something picks me up
and sets me down in your warm arms.)